Ahab And Jezebel
By Malcholm Dark
There
beneath the sun, moon and stars
Beneath the very eyes of God himself.
Lay a valley rich in beauty, favored by nature
The birth place of
all we hold good and sacred.
Across this fertile valley,
an eminent white flower
A powerful vine clinging tenaciously to
everything.
Exalted king of flowers standing tall for all to see
The breath of the land, Ahab--the flower of Israel.
But where the shadows fall and goodness is clouded
Stands a poison
Venus that is rose--captivating him.
Thorns run her stem like
scales upon a green dragon
The great instigator of persecution--captivating
him.
Behold the Jezebel flower, Phoenician princess
Painted petals of untold beauty, whore of Baal.
A fragrance so
beguiling to all, especially for Ahab
This flower exacts a deadly
price that Ahab shall pay.
Married, they now come
together in a field of love and lust
Each exacting tolls upon
one another and the valley as well.
His filament long and hard,
her stigma wet and sticky-sweet
His anther swollen with pollen,
Ahab pushes her petals back.
Jezebel thrusts her sepals forward
in rhythm
Ahab pounds his stamen deep inside her style.
Her ovules
receive his pollen and become seeds
These are the seeds of future
kings and queens.
Jezebel's poison is precise and untelling
within the kingdom
Ahab allies himself with her darkness and incisive
intellect.
Yet war is a constant for the king of Jezreel
And
in the battle of Ramoth-Gillead, Ahab falls.
The remnants
of what he was lay upon this land
Dried, decayed, twisted and
laced within the rocks.
And now begins a cruel and malicious rule
Long live the queen and her sons as kings!
Over the
horizon comes an angry storm, swallowing up the ground
A magnificent
warrior--a hero to some, a nightmare to others!
He flows across
the valley unchallenged and strikes down Jezebel
The strumpet-flower
is then cut up and the pieces trampled upon.
He then
destroys all the seeds of iniquity and impurity
The royal descendents
are beheaded, a valley wiped clean.
He rids the land of the evil
that had befallen it
Behold his presence, the great blue flower,
Jehu!
And the fertile valley was made pure again.
Author's Note:
flowers and biblical charatersAwards
Comments on "Ahab And Jezebel"
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A former member wrote:
a floristic allegory of an ancient tale?. original and astounding solution!
Pavel
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A former member wrote:
wow amazing...XD great minds really do think alike...i love it....very compelling read. u have a way of spinning a tale into a poem, very original writing :D
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A former member wrote:
Lost for words. This is a stunning write; you have quite a talent. Keep the ink flowing.
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On Thursday, May 20, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Another great write, I never knew flowers could be so intense, that part where the the Ahab and Jezebel flowers were "pollinating" will forever change the way I look at a flower lol, the biblical tie-ins were well done, thanks for sharing.