Death Becomes Us

By Malcholm Dark

Drugs and parties
Ecstasy and coke
All or nothing
Time bomb
Hell raiser!

Betrayed beliefs
Excessive indulgence
Cause and effect
Overdose
Murphy's law
Event arising
Silent passing!

Undeniable
Stupidity!

Within every moment of our time
Within the confines of our lives
Like the shooting stars we are...
Death becomes us.

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Published on Wednesday, April 21, 2010. Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Death Becomes Us "

A former member wrote: I adore how you wrote this, just the layout is amazing for starters, and the meaning is so true, maybe you could read some of my pieces as well. Keep up the good work.
A former member wrote: Inspirational with your words...
On Monday, April 26, 2010, Wiccad (124) wrote:

Very interesting write, I like the way it looks on the page. You the man MD.
On Wednesday, April 21, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860) wrote:

A very good write again Dark, acrostic worked really well with this one. "Undeniable Stupidity" so true, well done. Thanks for sharing.
On Thursday, April 22, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806) wrote:

Thanks PW, my first try... I hope someone who needs to, can get something from it...
A former member wrote: Very creative....I can't do poetry like that...nice work
On Thursday, April 22, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806) wrote:

Sure you can... if you go to my page and look at all my pieces, you won't find one like this.... this is my first try... find 2 or 3 words that stand out to you and write..easy