Death Becomes Us

By Malcholm Dark

Drugs and parties
Ecstasy and coke
All or nothing
Time bomb
Hell raiser!


Betrayed beliefs
Excessive indulgence
Cause and effect
Overdose
Murphy's law
Event arising
Silent passing!


Undeniable
Stupidity!


Within every moment of our time
Within the confines of our lives
Like the shooting stars we are...
Death becomes us.



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Copyright 2010 Malcholm Dark
Published on Wednesday, April 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I adore how you wrote this, just the layout is amazing for starters, and the meaning is so true, maybe you could read some of my pieces as well. Keep up the good work.

  • A former member wrote: Inspirational with your words...

  • Wiccad On Monday, April 26, 2010, Wiccad (125)By person wrote:

    Very interesting write, I like the way it looks on the page. You the man MD.

  • lupus tenebrae On Wednesday, April 21, 2010, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    A very good write again Dark, acrostic worked really well with this one. "Undeniable Stupidity" so true, well done. Thanks for sharing. Scholar

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, April 22, 2010, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    Thanks PW, my first try... I hope someone who needs to, can get something from it...

  • A former member wrote: Very creative....I can't do poetry like that...nice work

  • Malcholm Dark On Thursday, April 22, 2010, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    Sure you can... if you go to my page and look at all my pieces, you won't find one like this.... this is my first try... find 2 or 3 words that stand out to you and write..easy

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