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- "Haha I guess it's what you would call the snickering classroom syndrome. One word out of context is all it takes. I've had to alter works of my own because I was worried certain words would offend. Not only was it an extra effort, but it took away from the original vibe of the pieces. The Flintstone's part may have left me with undesired images, but it made a good point. I want my words back too. Write on my friend.
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Posted by lupus tenebrae on "I Want My Words Back" by Malcholm Dark
- "Thanks K, I tried so hard not to offend... this is really a sour spot with me, so many words you have to dance around because they mean something that brings on controversy.... thanks for the comment "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "I Want My Words Back" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha...I know!...reminds me of a recent debate in this country...there is a popular children's song that is often sung in primary schools with the refrain..."Laugh, kookaburra Laugh, kookaburra, gay your life must be..."...there was much debate about what to change the word "gay" to ...to prevent the whole school erupting into laughter each time they sang the song..."quite cheerful"...just doesn't cut it...in the end...I think they gave up and started to have a go at Santa and his Ho Ho Ho's....thanks Malcholm... :) "
Posted by kinkifrog on "I Want My Words Back" by Malcholm Dark
- "haha! Perfection in verse.. Dr Seuss is envious.... the weave of seussian references and reality with that nagging weight that drags us down.... just a wonderful mixture/tapestry and read. Fun stuff.... well composed. Thanks for the smiles, man :) *lights up* "
Posted by Unknown on "My Ugly Green Head" by Malcholm Dark
- "Ah, zombies have a special place in my heart :) An interesting portrayal of them as well, very nice... thanks for sharing this "
Posted by MercyRain on "Zombie Anthem" by Malcholm Dark
- "lmao. fun read! Stay away from the drag queens! lol. Thanks for the laugh, impeccably written, as always :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Wiener Rap" by Malcholm Dark
- "Wow..amazing write:) hmmmm i feel we feed that beast by thinking about those bad things everyday.instead of letting him take over we should take controll over him....i liked the note at the end:)thanks for sharing:)"
Posted by Unknown on "My Ugly Green Head" by Malcholm Dark
- "Lol:) hilarious...hey sometimes i think are you that kind of man who writes from experiences:) "and that is messed up" amazing write thanks for sharing:)"
Posted by Unknown on "Wiener Rap" by Malcholm Dark
- "I think deep inside, there's a Grinch in everyone. An ugly green head waiting to rear itself at the most inopportune moment. Dr. Seuss never sounded so dark and dismal, write on my friend."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "My Ugly Green Head" by Malcholm Dark
- "Brutal and expressive...I loved it. And I also concur that you should write a book. I would buy and read it...The axe man seems familiar to me tho...."
Posted by DarkDruidess on "The Art Show" by Malcholm Dark
- "If only we were in the 90's, this would be that hit song playing on the radio all day. The structure of this piece was just as hysterical as the content. I guess as times change, so do genders lol, Write on. "
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Wiener Rap" by Malcholm Dark
- "lol...damn!...that sucks Malcholm...or not...'muscle bound and meaner....baby's got a weiner'...that's got to be a song...my honey's got a schlong..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Wiener Rap" by Malcholm Dark
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