Comments by All Members
- "I've been on a wicked Bukowski binge lately and his words come to mind when I read this:
"if I have any advice about writing
poetry, it's--
don't."
"Like calling cancer a sneeze." Oh how true it is. I think we've all been there. And it's terrible. And you've summed it up nicely. See? If you just give it a shot you can write something, even if it's about how you can't write anything. Nicely done. And remember... you find inspiration in the strangest places, you just have to be patient."
Posted by wilted on "A Loss For Words?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "I guess that is why we have to "play the field" as they say until we find the right one. It is an ugly field, yet we do it for love. That asshole must have really done a number on you. "
Posted by Unknown on "Being used?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "I totally agree with you, why must people bicker over something so futile? I guess they never heard of freedom of religion, or they are just dogs, and all they can do is bark, because their chain is too short, very good write, especially for 2 minutes, I can't even get half of one in that length of time."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "How strong are your beliefs" by Musik2MyEyes
- "I do understand, in fact I've actually had dreams of myself driving into the river, this poem made me feel like I actually hit a wall, if that makes sense, it was a very good write, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "The Wall" by Musik2MyEyes
- "This is why i may never drive..you depict things is such a way it atracted me to this poem..well done on expresson ^^"
Posted by Shortnlethal on "The Wall" by Musik2MyEyes
- "Although hesitant to admit, I've found myself in this same boat; It's certainly a delicate crossroads."
Posted by Unknown on "The Wall" by Musik2MyEyes
- "That was so cool, great poem..."the only salt remains from the dried river bed on her cheeks..." Brilliant line, that said it all...bravo! thank-you for crashing into my day. "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "The Wall" by Musik2MyEyes
- "I have had similar thoughts, so you are not alone in that...sometimes it does just seem so appealing to it go and not have to wonder about what ifs and consequence...jump from the pier into the tide and no one would even turn their head to watch me sink to the bottom....If you ever need to talk you know where to find me :)"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "The Wall" by Musik2MyEyes
- "Powerful conclusion... horrific. and I am completely entranced by your tragedy... it is going to consume my thoughts for many a moment... I keep getting pictures of Hannibal Lecter and Mason swinging and slicing himself apart. "
Posted by Unknown on "Whisper?" by Musik2MyEyes
- "Another adage blown to bits.... time may be the wound..... but, eventually, our time will cease. Maybe it only heals when it stops. Either way, time is a bitch, and this write points that out well. "
Posted by Unknown on "Murderous Clock" by Musik2MyEyes
- "Don't press the red button! haha. sorry, looking for some comic relief after the honesty, and shear sorrow of this read. I don't know what he did to you, assuming this is all true, which, as it's written, tends to persuade me it is, but there are some people who are walking arguments for legitimate torture. So sorry, hun... chin up! Stay Strong! no button."
Posted by Unknown on "Why Am I Here?" by Musik2MyEyes
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