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Whisper?
By Musik2MyEyes
I was sleeping...hiding...knowing when I awoke I would leave.
Finding
peace in sleep...in knowing I was strong enough to go.
Softly melting
in my courage.
I think I heard him whisper my name.
Did
he?
Did he attempt to bring me from this peaceful slumber with a whisper?
Did he quietly call my name out to me?
Did he await the opening
of my eyes?
My ears strain now...trying...to recall.
Frantically
searching neurons for a buried memory.
Seeking a moment
That
is reminiscent of a soft breeze.
A whisper
I thought I
heard.
Was it in my dreams?
.
.
.
.
.
.
Alas
All I really ever hear
Are the echos
Of my
own screams.
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Copyright 2010 Musik2MyEyes
Published on Sunday, March 7, 2010.
Filed under: "Reflective" and
"Poetry"
Comments on "Whisper?"
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful with the imagery and the concept. The way this work is written is both settle and somewhat mysterious as to who you mean by 'he.' Wonderful poem.
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On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192)
wrote:
"He" was my ex. This is written about the night I was attacked during my sleep. Hope that clears it up for you.
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On Monday, March 8, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Wow, that is so good! The ending was a perfect compliment to one of the best pieces I've read. Thank-you.
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A former member wrote:
Powerful conclusion... horrific. and I am completely entranced by your tragedy... it is going to consume my thoughts for many a moment... I keep getting pictures of Hannibal Lecter and Mason swinging and slicing himself apart.
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