Comments by All Members
- "TOO DAMN COOL ! i come from a family of ALL welders , and this was amazing my father and all of my brothers (6) and there sons are all welders , this hit home , i applaud you . thanks for sharing"
Posted by Unknown on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "well done here... I too went thru a death/suicide... it always brings out the best in a poet... thanks for sharing... check out "tracy" that was my tribute...."
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
- "They say the hardest thing about being locked up is the lack of contro of what's happening outside and the way the mind plays tricks on what is happening and the lack of contact with the ones you love. Ive seen prisoners refuse visits and phone calls and cut of all contact with the outside world. I really enjoyed this write. keep writing."
Posted by alex herewane on "My mortal hell." by Iwas
- "it seems the artist is keen on trapping himself within himself.... I find that we may never get out of this, but we will always try to find out how. Good Write :]"
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "My mortal hell." by Iwas
- "I have been imprisoned...in reality...and metaphorically...your rage, frustration ,isolation and helplessness is well expressed here and felt...............but...It wasn't God who saved me..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "My mortal hell." by Iwas
- "*sighs*...
how can you say of yourself(on your profile page) that you know little of writing??? when your words here... show otherwise... your heart knows life poetically and thus... your soul writes it out painfully beautiful.... "
Posted by Unknown on "The Lie That Lost A Life" by Iwas
- "I used to do some welding back when I was about 15 - 18 (yes it was shop class but still welding) That experience made this poem all the more real for me.
I must say your word choices and your style really gave this poem a drive and pull of it's very own. Leaving a horrible empty feeling in the pit of my being at the end."
Posted by nightshade on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "This had a serious collision at the end. I really enjoy poetry that makes me feel something. However the hurt and pain in this make one happy to be alive and breathing. I am also sorry for your loss."
Posted by nightshade on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
- "That means a lot man thanks. OSHA on the other hand scares the hell out of me ;P "
Posted by Iwas on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "This......This truly and profoundly impressed the absolute shit out of me. I bet if you submitted this poem to OSHA, they'd circulate it for safety training purposes. I just can not get over the way you have turned something no one would ever usually connect with poetry as artisitic expression, like metal fabrication, into a timeless and very poignant piece. You do us all honor. --Draven. "
Posted by Unknown on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "my god man...I've read this about 10 times now...your style is unique...I am really hoping this isn't a true story or a workmate...I am sorry if it is...this is beautifully told...respectful..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "As welders cry." by Iwas
- "Heartbreaking, I felt an impact, much like getting hit by a train after reading this. I sympathize, but it was a very good write."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Dust settles silent" by Iwas
- "i read this poem. then i went to your profile and read it and decided i'd leave a comment and say: this is pretty darn cute. "
Posted by sIo on "Sad to see you smile." by Iwas
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