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"nice flow and imagery. loved it"
Posted by RubyXero on "Awaiting Dark Dominion" by Riven Waker

"well this peice is undoubtedly dark.... makes me wonder what brought this to your mind....write on....~S"
Posted by Unknown on "Awaiting Dark Dominion" by Riven Waker

"Brings to mind many a favorite haunt thank you for sharing"
Posted by DeaD_Grl666 on "Awaiting Dark Dominion" by Riven Waker

"i always await your writes man and you never disappoint, a new kingdom of evil, this synapses is brilliant, the depiction is vast with mystical sense, thy duke of a primordial darkness, exquisite, a grim awakening for some, but dawn of eyeless sight for others, a toast to those who fly, emaculate, well done, and as always reverance \m/"
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "To Establish the Great Dark Kingdom of the New Evil" by Riven Waker

"is Blowen away Oh wow, that is a real atomic bomb in terms of its power and impact.Your visions are just so realistic I'm impressed. with the flow and rhythm. The ending is perfect Overall, amazing piece of poetry well done "
Posted by Demoness Satanic on "To Establish the Great Dark Kingdom of the New Evil" by Riven Waker

"I really like your style, fuliginous shroud...sooty dark black..fuliginous shadows accompany many..great work!"
Posted by Ceolwulf on "To Establish the Great Dark Kingdom of the New Evil" by Riven Waker

"amazing. i loved the flow of the words."
Posted by Unknown on "The Universe In Her Eyes" by Riven Waker

"i like it, i really do. good write..... ~S"
Posted by Unknown on "Anthemic" by Riven Waker

"Nice style..doorways to dark places.."
Posted by Unknown on "Apostles of Darkness" by Riven Waker

"An excellent contribution to the mythos of Lovecraft and Derleth. Cthulhu fhtagn."
Posted by Lazarus Long on "O Great Cthulhu" by Riven Waker

"Deliciously cryptic...sounds good when spoken...'It's on for another fortnight ' has me curious ? "
Posted by kinkifrog on "Elves of the Strand" by Riven Waker

"You know I read this a couple of times, and the picture in my mind is very vivid, an orgiastic collection of images and emotion add to that the ultimate price of eternal suffering and misery..Nice work..."
Posted by Ceolwulf on "The Dream Descent" by Riven Waker

"fascinating imagery and ideas.... contemplative, artistic... I like the ingenuity of your voice.."
Posted by Unknown on "Solemn Sacrifice" by Riven Waker

"Interesting title.... I can't read it without the Nietzschean connotation.... on the one hand I think the inversion of purity and truth would be consistent with what Fritz explicitly denounces as inversion of the current value system.... rather than a deconstruction of it. Of course.... there is reason to suspect that being nice, ever, would then result in hypocrisy....which would be a rather unfortunate value system to uphold unless one really wanted to be a complete ass.... haha. either way interesting read... fiction, truth.... are they not both perspectival.... kudos fellow god.... worship only thyself!"
Posted by Unknown on "Beyond: Nice 'n' Evil" by Riven Waker

"i love your writes they dont deserve critques they deserve reverance, especially this one as always i am moved"
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "Beyond: Nice 'n' Evil" by Riven Waker

"Dark and delightful... so pure and true.. nice.. well written, thanks for sharing "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Beyond: Nice 'n' Evil" by Riven Waker

"Thank you for your critique. I'm kind of attached to that line both rythmically as well as as a dichotomy. Dark Hailz! -Ray"
Posted by Riven Waker on "Beyond: Nice 'n' Evil" by Riven Waker

"Awesome short piece, I think it may read better with out the 'so pure and true' line. Just a suggestion. Good write, either way. -He. "
Posted by TheProphetUntold on "Beyond: Nice 'n' Evil" by Riven Waker

"Wow an image filled ride... like long lost angels of annihilation, within the god like vessel... pure magic, my friend... thank-you for the write "
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Cherished Vessel" by Riven Waker

"'Now I can taste the cherished gossamer'... *licks lips* ...i wish I could...I like this one man."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Cherished Vessel" by Riven Waker

"an awakening, my soul leaps in splendour, as always, reverance to your art once more, "
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "Cherished Vessel" by Riven Waker

"Wow, memories.... an incredible piece of work here... I shall not die blazing away the centuries... so cool, so true... thank-you for sharing"
Posted by Malcholm Dark on "Maddening Memory" by Riven Waker

"Incredible write, a memory can be both a blessing and a curse I guess, well done, thanks for sharing."
Posted by lupus tenebrae on "Maddening Memory" by Riven Waker

"ha nice once again my spirit is moved, your darkness always felt and kept, awesome write"
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "Maddening Memory" by Riven Waker

"http://www.darkpoetry.com/node/work/120118"
Posted by Unknown on "O Great Cthulhu" by Riven Waker

"When I was in junior high school I read A Shadow Over Insmouth and it left me mesmerized. I had forgotten about Lovecraft but you reminded me. This here is not your average poem. I can't describe exactly what it is, but it makes me want to read Lovecraft and immerse myself in that world where it seems Chaos and Order battle over the reign of the universe."
Posted by Unknown on "O Great Cthulhu" by Riven Waker

"Intriguing read, an interesting piece"
Posted by A Life Without You on "Innocence Reborn" by Riven Waker

"I found this to be pretty profound man. The moon imagery hooked me and the last stanza tugged me to shore. Excellent visuals as always Ray."
Posted by Dilated View on "To Become a God" by Riven Waker

"well executed,all of your writes are amazing,extremely profound,and striking,my spirit has been moved.reverance "
Posted by Eye of Minerva on "The Conquest of Heaven" by Riven Waker

"Your writing is sick Riven... Keep them coming. I will be awaiting your next piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Solemn Sacrifice" by Riven Waker

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