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"...very romantic...blessed to have a love like that..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Selfless" by Lylani

"Sounds like you've got a keeper, thanks and great poem."
Posted by dwells on "Selfless" by Lylani

"Your works have capivated me from the time you arived here. So glad to have you around. You have a magical way of making me feel each line as if I had been there myself. Perhaps because I have lived through very similar moments. But you weave a certain beauty into the heartbreak that I never could. Lovely as always Miss L.. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Speeding Cars" by Lylani

"Sounds about right to me - you cheat and pay the consequences. Once a cheater...Well done and thanks so much for this adult perspective and wonderful simile."
Posted by dwells on "Speeding Cars" by Lylani

"Not a new idea, the dark v. light metaphor, but this is a refreshing spin.Very well written and something that I'll certainly enjoy reading again. Thank you for sharing!"
Posted by Unknown on "I kissed an Angel" by Lylani

"The last part hit me hard. Excellent piece!"
Posted by lordbongo on "You chose this" by Lylani

"Oh the contrast of feelings, in your 2 latest. A spiral of emotion that took me for a ride. I so look forward to your every post. ^V^ "
Posted by veingo on "I am strength" by Lylani

"I felt a kick in the gut with that one. Nice work. "
Posted by Cimmerian Musings on "Role play" by Lylani

"Powerfully emotional piece. The pain is palpable, and the torment lingers. May you find the peace you deserve. "
Posted by Meadowhawk on "Memories Of Nights Best Forgotten" by Lylani

"Ouch! That hit home. Very insightful work. Thank you...I think ( still stinging from that last line) "
Posted by Cimmerian Musings on "I am strength" by Lylani

"Wow! This really spoke to me. This read like the female version of my life, almost like a reply. Thank you. "
Posted by Cimmerian Musings on "Adulterated loathing" by Lylani

"How would as whore copulate unlike a woman? HMMmmm... What do I know, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Adulterated loathing" by Lylani

"Beauty, bliss, and easy rides! speaks volume's. Thank's for sharing this write."
Posted by TyrantAvDetForbannet on "Adulterated loathing" by Lylani

"You have great strength. And your very talented in expressing yourself through your writing. well done."
Posted by TyrantAvDetForbannet on "Comes the end" by Lylani

"and such is life. another good write."
Posted by TyrantAvDetForbannet on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"heartfelt, great write. check out mine love or lust for a succubus..i can relate"
Posted by TyrantAvDetForbannet on "Memories Of Nights Best Forgotten" by Lylani

"I agree with dwells but I also know the feeling of freedom from being without someone while at the same time hurting because they're gone. Great write! "
Posted by DarkSkies on "Memories Of Nights Best Forgotten" by Lylani

"You put the word "from" in twice, in the third stanza. As for real opinions; this was sorrowful, yet beautiful. A bit unsettling, and still comfortable at the same time. You always ballance the different ends of emotion so well in your writes. Thanks for sharing. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Comes the end" by Lylani

"He ain't worth it darlin' and hope you feel better soon, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Memories Of Nights Best Forgotten" by Lylani

"This sent shards of glass through my spine. You command emotion so well with your words.. ^V^"
Posted by veingo on "Memories Of Nights Best Forgotten" by Lylani

"sad write there but nice "
Posted by Evil Ash on "Memories Of Nights Best Forgotten" by Lylani

"the title reminded me of Floyd... after all, it's not easy, banging your heart against some mad bugger's wall. I also liked "Chased the winds And been left standing" such an account of life's loves how they send us against bricks end us winded on deserted streets. Very soft ending, may this candle never die... there was so much past tense near the end, the 'always' made me hope that such a flame had not run out of wick..... Thanks for the soft words and pretty imagery, such love is not to be denied."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "I've loved brick walls" by Lylani

"Beautiful sentiments well said, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "I've loved brick walls" by Lylani

"So sad - why the silent treatment anyway I wonder? Great write; thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Fading Out" by Lylani

" lovely inspiring write...especially the ending. only on the fourth line 'sore' should be soar... write on !"
Posted by natalie on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani

"Thankyou for this message of raw emotion and truth."
Posted by dwells on "You chose this" by Lylani

"This was a dull ache from the beginning but the last stanza brought tears. "
Posted by ebonyamore on "You chose this" by Lylani

"Well hello there miss... Nice work here.. Glad to have came across you!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "Silently defiant" by Lylani

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