Comments by All Members
- "Pretty, unfalteringly so. Such an intimate and tender notion... if only. You poetry has such a melancholy mosaic to it... but I can always tell the dream within you is alive, no matter how broken. Thank you for that. You give me hope. "
Posted by Unknown on "pressed flowers (in your spine)" by sanglante
- "i really like this, im a sucker for love poems. i love the declarative sentence at the end, its a nice close. "
Posted by Unknown on "cage of hands" by sanglante
- "This is a suffocating piece, almost a sense of mania, or a desperation. Like in drowning the struggle to break the surface for a saving breath, a breath being the epiphany that is so desired, (or so it seems) in this work. "
Posted by Lydia Jade on "ragdoll at sea" by sanglante
- "Love the last verse especially. This is wretchedly beautiful. You spoil us."
Posted by Unknown on "pierced" by sanglante
- ""birds throwing/their breasts on thorns." truly stunning..i loved this."
Posted by Unknown on "pierced" by sanglante
- "you haunt my thoughts. If thinking is part of our being, and we cannot think without thinking about something, then what we think about must be some part of our being as long as we are thinking about that something... perhaps even one of the closest and central parts of our being, to the extent that what makes us what we are is our self consciousness, and one cannot be thinking about thinking without be self conscious, can one? Perhaps thinking about someone consciously is one way that person becomes us..... maybe....."
Posted by Unknown on "tell me" by sanglante
- ":) I like this, maybe trying should happen both ways. You give some and you take some love, maybe then you'll be ready to fully love. "
Posted by Mars on "to love, [i try]" by sanglante
- "Brings back the old days for me... I'm out of it now but this is a very realistic view of so many relationships that shouldnt exist"
Posted by Unknown on "empty." by sanglante
- "luminous and delicate. . . but stopstilled tragic at the end; a cursory exhaustive piece. well done."
Posted by Unknown on "wire frames." by sanglante
- "beautiful! i love your use of similes. and i personally think 'wire frames' are every bit as beautiful as feathers. some prefer them...the question is who."
Posted by RubyXero on "wire frames." by sanglante
