empty.

By sanglante

you lack purpose
and substance.

stop hurting me
with your inability
to be stable.

you leave my stomach
in hard knots.

i fucking hate you..


not.

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Copyright 2010 cee
Published on Saturday, February 14, 2009.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love the last line.

  • A former member wrote: Brings back the old days for me... I'm out of it now but this is a very realistic view of so many relationships that shouldnt exist

  • Leith Plunkett On Saturday, February 14, 2009, Leith Plunkett (237)By person wrote:

    I love the raw emotion. Reads so REAL in its mixed emotion. Well captured

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