wire frames.
By sanglante
i dance on the power lines
of electricity
composed from inner-friction.
you called me an angel
though my wings have been
incinerated.
all that remains are the sickly,
twisted wire
frames.
yet you say i'm beautiful,
as the dark thoughts
run down my face.
like crimson butterflies being pinned down,
onto the disgrace of a grey cardboard frame.
the real world isn't
for me,
since my heart is too feeble
to support my forever
racing thoughts.
hold me down and prepare to die.
i'm
tired of everyone's intertwining lies.
like twisted vines laced
with blood-red thorns,
in dense forests of horrific beauty.
bleeding you dry as you attempt to pass through.
as the purest
red rose,
of infinite scents that scream love,
will be picked.
and prick the tender fingers of fair maidens..
it shall.
slowly it will wither,
blackening with the coming toll of
death's bells.
Comments on "wire frames."
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A former member wrote:
luminous and delicate. . . but stopstilled tragic at the end; a cursory exhaustive piece. well done.
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A former member wrote:
beautiful. i love the imagery of the first two stanzas especially.
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On Monday, February 2, 2009, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
beautiful! i love your use of similes. and i personally think 'wire frames' are every bit as beautiful as feathers. some prefer them...the question is who.
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely excellent.