cage of hands

By sanglante

i can see your face
it's stuck
in my head.

blurring in
and out.

you're
mocking me,
and the fact that
i just cannot
seem to capture you.

next time
i'll cage you
within
my heart
and hands.

feeling your hair
and the gentleness
of your eyes
..
you're mine.

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Copyright 2010 sanglante
Published on Thursday, December 9, 2010.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Why do I feel like this is about me?

  • A former member wrote: i really like this, im a sucker for love poems. i love the declarative sentence at the end, its a nice close.

  • Crush_With_Eyeliner On Friday, December 10, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (47)By person wrote:

    I second that. A very effective closing statement.

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