Comments by All Members
- "o man..i can relate to this. vulnerability. i can honestly say vulnerability is my biggest down fall. people use it against me. like conartists to my moods and feelings. well done."
Posted by Twilight on "Crush" by Silent_Raven
- "Indeed, I've just realized this, and I wish I could've had that wisdom earlier...very good write."
Posted by Six-Out on "Your Advice" by Silent_Raven
- "it is such a confusing and emotional period in ones life...and you seem to be on the right track..Dont give up hun...even if it too hard to bear...You'll make it!!"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Your Advice" by Silent_Raven
- "this piece just dropped my jaw...if all the youth of today realized this..how much easier it would be for them to venture into adulthood.."
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "Your Advice" by Silent_Raven
- "I rather enjoyed this, especially liked the "i've been a weed..." line, took the piece in a couple of different directions. Well done, thanks. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "Your Advice" by Silent_Raven
- "hey i have a poem title "little death"!...anyway, wow this is fantastic...i love it.."because you're dirty now,
in a way i can't help you wash off".that's powerful"
Posted by Loserland on "a little death" by Silent_Raven
- "they are more than frustrating... but about their eyes... well you hit the nail right on the head as far as my life story goes -kRYz"
Posted by Crystal Passion on "Crush" by Silent_Raven
- "wow..this is a really powerfull piece..and unfortunetly i can relate to this on so many levels, it is like you're me taking in my head. it is a sad thing when we realize that that innocence in us has been killed by those around us, "
Posted by nell on "Lost Little Daughter, part 2" by Silent_Raven
- "i am a bit of both in this one- extremely sardonic, but it does give a sick satisfaction, to be so addicted to a lover (no, no physical abuse, they're just metaphors)."
Posted by Silent_Raven on "Violent Kiss" by Silent_Raven
- "I was once in a relationship I gave up to much power and I lost a couple years of life trying yo please the unpleaseable keep writing ...Love it"
Posted by Unknown on "ADDICTED" by Silent_Raven
- "Smoetimes growing up you lose all the qualities that are yours for only the time you are alotted to be innocent and when we lose it we all should mourn our lost self."
Posted by Unknown on "lost little daughter (pt. 1)" by Silent_Raven
- "Oh, sweetie, you dont want to go back in time...Everyone's little girl goes away but in time you will find her and take from her what you need for your tomorrows. Right now she is hiding because she is scared. Good luck and thanks for sharing"
Posted by angelunderneath on "lost little daughter (pt. 1)" by Silent_Raven
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