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Violent Kiss
By Silent_Raven
for my eternal beloved, pleasure pain it is...
Take me!
Please disarm me
And break me.
Cut and slash me
And leave me dead
Under the shadows.
Burn me
Under your blazing gaze
And kill me
After you kill my pride.
Wound me
And let me fester here,
Alone and raped
By your undying love.
Tell me
How much I need this pain;
Prove to me
How much you love me.
Beat me
Until I understand
The purpose of your violent kiss.
-march 25, 2003-
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Copyright 2003 Silent_Raven
Published on Wednesday, August 20, 2003.
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, ashrain
(16)
wrote:
I love it! Its fits wonderfully with my mood these days. Wonderful write!Absolutly wonderful! ~ash
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A former member wrote:
fascinatingly delicious. there are some great lines in here...and I want more ^_^
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On Wednesday, September 3, 2003, Liz
(267) wrote:
Thought provoking: Is she abused and sarcastic or just masochistic?
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On Sunday, September 14, 2003, Silent_Raven
(19) wrote:
i am a bit of both in this one- extremely sardonic, but it does give a sick satisfaction, to be so addicted to a lover (no, no physical abuse, they're just metaphors).
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
Hmm...I wonder what this would look like carved into someone's back...no, that would be mean, but it's a good write nonetheless.
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On Wednesday, August 20, 2003, angelunderneath
(60) wrote:
scary and erotic at the same time... I like
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