Comments by All Members
- "i loved them...i'm crying in public...Goddess, i miss You...
But as long as you try too, I know I’ll make it through, so we can again meet.
I can see the glory in it all too, and how wondrous it really is, in all its beauty
loved this...You speak my mind..."
Posted by heroineyes on "My Way of Missing" by Rhys Ki
- "Nice pace for the first section! Interesting change in form in the second part -- provides for excellent structural contrasting..."
Posted by DIATRICUS on "My Way of Missing" by Rhys Ki
- "Beautiful, I enjoyed your dark imagery, and the style in which is written. It has a certain old everlasting undead feeling to it."
Posted by Unknown on "Cold Embrace" by Rhys Ki
- "This is so awesome. I don't get it, why cry at funerals? I understand crying at home over the loss, but when everyone gets together like that, I don't know, how about remembering the good times? And of course playing rock n roll. Great write. "
Posted by Unknown on "Praising the Casket ; The Dismal Game" by Rhys Ki
- ""For no sooner do you make me fall,
That I land in your arms.
You save me once more from
Your own invented harm."
dark and sad...it almost sounds like a staged love..."
Posted by heroineyes on "Cancel Bay" by Rhys Ki
- "I found my foot tapping..... is someone planning to strap on the air guitar and cut loose at the local karaoke:)"
Posted by Unknown on "The Dirge of Light" by Rhys Ki
- ""I'd love to bleed you dry and watch your skin turn to marble." That's intense. The whole poem is, infact. Seems to end a little abruptly. I think it works, though, considering it jumps around throughout. Overall, nice work."
Posted by wilted on "Dark Alleys and Broken Hearts" by Rhys Ki
- "this is an amazing piece of music, i wouldlove to hear it perfomrmed as well, better yet, i would love to come up with some riffs to this -symph-"
Posted by Rebel tiGer King on "Call Me Angel" by Rhys Ki
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