Dark Alleys and Broken Hearts

By Rhys Ki

just a little feelings...



Come, I'll meet you in an alley that's dark.


I'd love to bleed you dry and watch your skin turn to marble.


Aren't you disgusted by how human you are?


Am I not? Stab me; strangle me; see for yourself.


If you're thinking I'm a safe bet, I'm betting I'm not.


Just kill me, kiss me, and see if I rot.

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© 2008 Rhys Ki
Published on Monday, April 7, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Fantecstasy On Monday, April 7, 2008, Fantecstasy (122)By person wrote:

    Impressively done and dark, and all things be considered... I loved it a lot. Especially the ending, a nice touch of romantic doom. *tips hat*

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Monday, April 7, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (359)By person wrote:

    Wow, *agrees with Sketso* A big welcome back, great piece...

  • Sketso On Monday, April 7, 2008, Sketso (435)By person wrote:

    ...dare I say... a perfect answer. And yes, I am disgusted by how human I am. Welcome back from your hiatus, Jess.

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