Batteries Not Included
By Rhys Ki
Never has a house made a home
And who could love that rock in their shoe?
But how was I to know
They refinanced their home
The day that I moved in?
In the beginning I thought it would all be just fine,
Writing scripts for the fantasies in my head.
But now I’m out of reasons to believe
And I’m ashamed of this lie I’m living.
For their sake, I know I need to leave
Like I never wanted anything.
But the pain I’m creating now is still less
Than the wounds that I left behind.
I’ve been long torn between the two,
Serving as a crutch for each side.
I can’t even breathe ‘cause the houses are wired.
With this split family some assembly’s required.
And no matter where I go, I am secluded.
Now, I know that batteries just aren’t included.
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2007 Rhys Ki
Published on Thursday, June 21, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Batteries Not Included"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Wednesday, September 12, 2007, Sketso
(435) wrote:
Wow... makes a man rethink his rhetoric, reading this. VERY nice write.
-
A former member wrote:
no it is fantastic Veingo is correct.. great job hun.
-
A former member wrote:
oh god, this is absolutely original and wonderfully clever
-
On Friday, June 22, 2007, veingo
(533) wrote:
I don't see why nobody has commented on this one. I liked the flow of it and there are several clever lines. Thanks for sharing. ^V^
-
On Monday, June 25, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
thanks, veingo. I appreciate it... I dunno; maybe it sucks more than I thought.
-
On Tuesday, April 29, 2008, Choronzon
(209) wrote:
Nah, I've found that what I think are my better works are usually the least read. I know some others share my sentiments.