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Amongst the Flowers
By Rhys Ki
I am no longer the forgiving kind,
For I let heartbreak make up my mind.
A nameless, roguish boy from the past
Will make sure that no other love will last.
I stand alone in a field of budding foliage.
They encircle my thoughts with their majestic
And splendid arrays of smells and scents
I am enveloped by its delicate prominence
This wonderfully crafted gift of nature has inspired
Songs...
Poetry…
And Love...
They gather so much adoration and veneration
With their marvelous pallet of luminous colors.
So, still alone, I give-in to contemplation;
Why has true love not found me among the flowers?
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© 2007 Rhys Ki
Published on Friday, July 27, 2007.
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On Thursday, July 3, 2008, heroineyes
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wrote:
i think this one is my favorite...i love the last few lines...the image they present is gorgeous
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On Monday, October 22, 2007, Sketso
(435) wrote:
You are a rose in the midst of crabgrass, and don't you forget it! Thanks for sharing this ache...
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On Tuesday, September 25, 2007, Grim_Sorrow
(75) wrote:
I love the image this work portrays... also, impressive in the fact that the subject matter is so easy to relate too. Who hasn't at one point pondered loves manifestation and when they too would feel its grasp. keep writing .
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On Sunday, September 9, 2007, NapoleonsLust
(16) wrote:
if a beauty were standing in a field of flowers, whose to say that they are worthy to pick such a delicate flower?-NL
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A former member wrote:
good things come to those who wait, great things happen to those who just go for it.
great write. =)
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A former member wrote:
that happens. Be well Ki.
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A former member wrote:
He is right. IF you are patient it should find you. In the meantime, figure out what you are really wanting and needing from this love, rather than figuring out after that what you thought you wanted is actually something very different. It's a bitch when
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On Friday, July 27, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
Loved that first line. I think you won't have a problem finding true love. Just don't let the past rust you over. Good things take a while. great read.
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On Friday, July 27, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
Thanks. It's greatly appreciated...
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