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  • "tragedy is, in it's own way, endearing... we live to learn and sometimes we actually do learn a thing or two... there is always tomorrow... and the other side of the rainbow... ~worm~"
    Posted by worm on "Tell me it's not the finale..." by openureyes
  • ""The happy beginning" - so much wisdom in that line alone. There is no single "happy ending" to life, there is just a series of beginnings (or endings if you are a glass half empty kind of person). It is constantly a journey, filled with change, new beginnings, new directions you would never have chosen if it were up to you...and yet, that is life, circling back around to the start again. Excellent piece! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Aftershock ....and I love You" by openureyes
  • "working those womanly wiles till he's into blind submission... heh hehe heh. nice. thanks for sharing"
    Posted by natalie on "Lucky you" by openureyes
  • "struck home right through. been there don't like there . thanks for sharing"
    Posted by natalie on "Stuck" by openureyes
  • ""Inside this bubble I hear the words I wish to hear", I love that whole section where you explore that side of turning inward. Excellent piece! Ciao, T/S"
    Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Stuck" by openureyes
  • "no not no relief.... searching for something that makes sense of this carnival of life. I can almost feel the bubble.... the separation and isolation that retains me in my own chaotic fun house..."
    Posted by Unknown on "Stuck" by openureyes
  • ""Nothing healthy about this emotional hangover" That sounds like about the worst feeling a person could possibly have. This hurt to read, such frustration. Nicely written."
    Posted by Dilated View on "Stuck" by openureyes
  • "This read chaotic and out of focus for me. Like being in the heat of the moment rather than describing something that happened. Inner demons are a real bitch. Nicely done."
    Posted by Dilated View on "The Glamorous Life" by openureyes
  • "This was amazingly well put. I feel this write, and THAT is the makings of poetry worth remembering. Well read. Jade"
    Posted by Lydia Jade on "what I know" by openureyes
  • "lucky him, no doubt! Good to see you're in a better frame of mind these days... subtlety in sexuality... sensual... yum. God bless endorphins!"
    Posted by Unknown on "Lucky you" by openureyes
  • "wow... Fantastic! I absolutely lpve this write, it feels so real to me, like it is i speaking to my lover.."
    Posted by ToxicLove on "Lucky you" by openureyes
  • "for some reason your sn always reminds me of Six AM's song. This sounds like all the makings of poetry."
    Posted by Unknown on "what I know" by openureyes
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