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officially fucked
By openureyes
without a doubt
and just for this moment
all a dead end street
the slightest expectations become
the biggest let downs
the unknown will drive you mad
reality becomes a lot more blurry
fuck it.
and its to too late now to stop giving a fuck.
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© 2009 openureyes
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On Thursday, June 16, 2011, Devilish
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wrote:
I truley love your way of expression...
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On Sunday, August 16, 2009, Moonflower
(298) wrote:
i f**king love this...very relatable.
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A former member wrote:
i like the last line most.....its like the rest of it was just steading a nail in a board with fingertips and a few taps and the last line was *WHACK* drove it straight in.....
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On Friday, June 26, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
awww you're awesome...perfect!!xoxo
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On Friday, June 26, 2009, Miss Macabre
(9) wrote:
I can relate so well to every line. Great write. :)
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A former member wrote:
Hmmmm.... now that doesn't sound like teeth clenching to me. But at least it's official; I mean, that's gotta be better than unofficial, no? The fourth line is severely depressing. It does rob all hope. I like to think it's never too late... but I'm not sure how to interpret the last line... literally or more abstractly. I'm gonna go with the abstract and say, in general, it's good to give a fuck, even if one ends up officially fucked. all the best shweets.
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A former member wrote:
*sigh* especially now, thi hurts, i mean it really bites in and growls tearing arteries away, nice one
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