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"Well this was definitly um arousing in a way, until you realized it was all just a dream. Good work. -Morb"
Posted by Mistress Morbid on "wet dream" by SourInnocence

"oh my gosh! please dont take this down. its on my favorites : ) even though the title was "wet DREAM" i forgot this was about a dream until the end. : )"
Posted by Sinnocence on "wet dream" by SourInnocence

"oh m god! how can you call this a piece of shit? i think its fabulous! im not a fan of rhyming poetry often because it usually sounds elementary, but the phrasing and flow of it makes me love it! excellent!"
Posted by Sinnocence on "freeing the lies watching night die" by SourInnocence

"i guess this is just a piece of shit then."
Posted by SourInnocence on "freeing the lies watching night die" by SourInnocence

"i read it again...and i love it still."
Posted by Twilight on "just let me touch her" by SourInnocence

"i know what its like to go home knowing you just had one of the greatest nights of your life. you can only lie in bed and smile. and just pray that what happened that day means something for or in the future."
Posted by Twilight on "memories of the best night of my life." by SourInnocence

"boy i have missed your work. almost there- a though and tinge of hope. which is then snatched up and away from you. and part of you fades away. until revived again."
Posted by Twilight on "a blind leap" by SourInnocence

""..I fell back to earth,And accepted the pain.."--simply put--good work--PointlessX "
Posted by PointlessX on "a blind leap" by SourInnocence

"WoW...I too was caught off guard at the end........but I also understand where this came from.....just never had the guts to admit it...good job"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "die beautiful" by SourInnocence

"hmmmmm... the last line caught me off guard... i think twisted is a good adjective. interesting works too. "
Posted by Jonas on "die beautiful" by SourInnocence

"I still have scars to this day, but I have let go and moved on. Looks like you are doing the same. Good work. ..Morb =)"
Posted by Mistress Morbid on "insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)" by SourInnocence

"i dig this....its dark and sexual and just a little bit raunchy....cool"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "take me for granted" by SourInnocence

"Nice one, guess cause i'm kind of dark in the mind i thought it was kind of Provocative"
Posted by Unknown on "take me for granted" by SourInnocence

"this is a great poem its sad but it mean something i really like it"
Posted by Cinn on "insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)" by SourInnocence

"This was touching. I agree w/ Angel on the words are cheap part. Nice work."
Posted by Drifter on "insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)" by SourInnocence

"I had to read one of your old ones here...the title caught my eye really, this write has a great flow to it+Fallen One+"
Posted by The Fallen Angel on "red tears" by SourInnocence

"I ilke "...Because words are cheap, but cut the deepest" I grab sustenance in these words+Fallen One+"
Posted by The Fallen Angel on "insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)" by SourInnocence

"*sniff sniff* damn it hurts...beautiful seriously-]darkness[-"
Posted by whisperer on "insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)" by SourInnocence

"i like it! great job "
Posted by Unknown on "insert eye-catching title here. (saying goodbye)" by SourInnocence

"I liked this a lot. Made me think. No one should have to be what they arent. - Orchid"
Posted by Unknown on "following in shoes too big" by SourInnocence

"you gave some thought in this piece, the message you have conveyed+Fallen One+"
Posted by The Fallen Angel on "following in shoes too big" by SourInnocence

"*tear* _-=Evil=-_"
Posted by Unknown on "indecision" by SourInnocence

"Wow.. I like this.. Good write"
Posted by Anybody_Killette on "red tears" by SourInnocence

"Great Write Here. I Really Felt This Piece. Nice. GPhD."
Posted by GreekPhilosopher on "indecision" by SourInnocence

"This makes me sad. Very enjoyable though. Nice work."
Posted by Choronzon on "indecision" by SourInnocence

"the last lines brought a wry little smile to my face... excellent piece... struggles, frustration, fun..."
Posted by Jonas on "for the one i love" by SourInnocence

"The whole piece is very well put together. Dancing towards the end. And the end ... Well the end was just. I think I will say rare in a way, becouse you seem to nail what many try to in it with ease. Great work."
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "sweet dreams" by SourInnocence

""Free at last..." a longing that will never cease."
Posted by Unknown on "i just need to get this out." by SourInnocence

"ahh yes public breakdowns are the worst... beautifully done though"
Posted by yslehc on "public breakdown" by SourInnocence

"well put...i know this feeing all too well"
Posted by Loserland on "public breakdown" by SourInnocence

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