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red tears
By SourInnocence
Cold steel upon my body
Excites me
Entices me
It even satisfies me
I lay on the tile floor
Drained,
Pained,
Deranged.
And yet this justifies.
My happy ending to a not so happy life,
Slowly,
Tenderly,
Carefully
I cut into this pale shell.
And I cry my red tears as I leave this hell.
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Copyright 2003 SourInnocence
Published on Tuesday, May 13, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "red tears"
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A former member wrote:
your work gives me chills, so hateful, but so emotional.. like everything you're feeling comes out in a few lines :)amazing
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On Tuesday, February 17, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(234)
wrote:
I had to read one of your old ones here...the title caught my eye really, this write has a great flow to it+Fallen One+
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On Sunday, February 1, 2004, Anybody_Killette
(47) wrote:
Wow.. I like this.. Good write
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On Thursday, July 3, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Good Write Keep it up
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On Monday, June 23, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
I like this new way of writing of yours. It's very expressive!
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A former member wrote:
ooh yes, nicely done! Good write!
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