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- "This is sad, it's like you've lost everything except the parts you'd rather not have, I mean, what is courage when there is always fear, and where does love fit into a person molded by hatred?"
Posted by Ideas on "let me out" by SeekingNirvana
- "I didn't like the meter in the sixth line, doesn't fit the rest of the poem. Making it flow a bit better there would greatly improve this piece I think, and a good write it is at that. Thanks for the read."
Posted by Unknown on "Unaware" by SeekingNirvana
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