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Unaware
By SeekingNirvana
Unaware
Through the hallway, down the stairs
Lies terror you are unaware.
They want to hurt you
They don’t want you alive.
They want to hurt you
You won't survive.
Through the hallway, down the stairs
Is the end of the world, but you don't care.
One to the left, three to the right.
There is no escape. You die tonight.
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Copyright 2003 OneWingedAngel
Published on Thursday, May 1, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Unaware"
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On Thursday, September 22, 2005, vaultgrl
(185)
wrote:
darkly beautiful, great write!
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A former member wrote:
I didn't like the meter in the sixth line, doesn't fit the rest of the poem. Making it flow a bit better there would greatly improve this piece I think, and a good write it is at that. Thanks for the read.
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
I like this. It gives you a feeling of doom!
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On Thursday, May 8, 2003, diavolessa
(207) wrote:
I hope my death is as peaceful as this piece! *sigh* I like it!!!
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On Friday, May 9, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
nice poem
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A former member wrote:
simply brilliant! a fav of mine
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