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let me out
By SeekingNirvana
soul
this is the place where dreams come from
the place i lost long ago
courage
this is the part i know the best
i face the world head on
fear
this is the part i hate the most
i know it is there all the time
hatered
this is the part that brought this before you
this is me. it captured my mind
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Copyright 2003 OneWingedAngel
Published on Monday, June 16, 2003.
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On Tuesday, October 19, 2004, Ideas
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wrote:
This is sad, it's like you've lost everything except the parts you'd rather not have, I mean, what is courage when there is always fear, and where does love fit into a person molded by hatred?
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2003, SeekingNirvana
(27) wrote:
hmm.. i supose this isn't being read as i intended it to have been...
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On Monday, June 16, 2003, nell
(270) wrote:
i have to agree with manywalks, i like this piece though, itis lik reading four poems that fit into eachother.
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On Monday, June 16, 2003, Saint_Reaper
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On Monday, June 16, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
ya know, each of these verses would be able to stand on their own. ~ mw
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