Comments by All Members
- "God damn! this was fucking fabulous! the words pulsed right off the page and so many killer lines i couldnt quote one if i tried..i wish i had room on my favorites for this *tips hat* ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "holy fucking shit. this is amazing and i know exactly what your talking about..well from the other end anyway. and i was going to say something else but i restrained myself. good-day sir. "
Posted by Mari on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "great write. a bit depressing but still a powerful piece. never feel like you have to explain yourself to those who dont understand ~tamara"
Posted by Unknown on "land of heroes, dead" by edenscancer
- "his was beautifully written, the way you repeated the beginning at the end... all the more splended. i like your style"
Posted by Unknown on "Mezzanine" by edenscancer
- "no words cannot speak here, i leave them only to let you know i stood here."
Posted by Jonas on "refract" by edenscancer
- "Holy shit this is sexy...as I'm eating my crackers and drinking an eggnogg milk shake. I feel compelled to hit the bed and take someone with me though, love it."
Posted by Army Barbie on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "Brilliant! I love this...full of emotion I can feel you. Simply beautiful."
Posted by Mylissa on "Lover" by edenscancer
- "I have commented on this piece and you are right I DO LOVE it...your words are so passionate. "
Posted by Mylissa on "thrust" by edenscancer
- ""I'm written on the wall while someone else writes me, at 5am"...sometimes its the ugly writes that show the most honesty and talent. its harder to make words portray ugly. i loved this peice. especially the ending."
Posted by verablue on "5am" by edenscancer
- "This was dreamy like Cicre said it was all surreal but as real as the everyday when I awake. This was incredible the images you conspired into my mind, the heart flutter and lost abandonment~Gothic"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Lover" by edenscancer
- "you have a different style.. dreamy, gentle, though aware of yourself in these situations.. as if writing emotions come naturally, quietly perceptive."
Posted by Unknown on "Lover" by edenscancer
- "Oh EDEN! its bee ever so long. This was beautifully written. Kudos. "
Posted by Dei on "Lover" by edenscancer
- "Eloquently put, illuminating the harsh reality of seduction, abuse. How this is written, I can feel it, even thought I don't want to. Oh, how the heart adapts to keep sane."
Posted by Aunty Depressant on "Lover" by edenscancer
- ".. only to be reinforced by the repetition of the final two lines .. damn .. Seraphim is right .. it's difficult to comment when grief is displayed so genuinely as though captured within a devastating portrait..
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Posted by mozarts cat on "wild orchid" by edenscancer
- "i read this when it was first posted and couldn't find words to comment for fear of tripping .. 'and her heart is like the orchids they laid at your feet when they buried you' .. this utterly crashes the heart .. "
Posted by mozarts cat on "wild orchid" by edenscancer
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