Comments by All Members
- "Wow, I really liked how cold and detatched this was. I love that their true characters surfaced and they did what had to be done, and the fact that everyone carried on as if nothing had happened was brilliant."
Posted by Hands_Around_My_Throat on "We Thought He Was Dead" by johntaiyu
- "So true, and I won't pretend to know what all of that feels like but I still see what the kids are like and I wonder how they will react to their reality check."
Posted by Unknown on "Dead Brothers" by johntaiyu
- "I like this. I suppose i've died a lot in my life, since it's not yet very well lived.
Or just when I wake up sometimes... and realize i'm still here."
Posted by Unknown on "The Grinding Down" by johntaiyu
- "my heart needed this........a beautiful sentimental insightful knowing. and a truth peaceful as it is graceful. thank you~"
Posted by Unknown on "This is the Prayer" by johntaiyu
- "so much we assume and take for granted.... like we can actually get outside our minds.... as if all we sensed were really just that and no more, as if we could say what more there is, or what less.... so many thoughts... and who is to say that there is not a seamless end to the only verse we've ever known.... well conceived, pensive and deep. thank you for making me think *bows*"
Posted by Unknown on "The Only Universe I have Ever Known" by johntaiyu
- "it's crazy what an amazing writer you are... this was high dosage melancholy.. anatomical matter of factness.."
Posted by Unknown on "for the ride home" by johntaiyu
- "Great flow and rhythm. Great way to show the cycle of love. You did a great job breaking the poem apart to make the reader flow with your work."
Posted by Unknown on "My Perfect Wilderness" by johntaiyu
- "this write still speaks volumes to me... and that closing line, 30 years too late, is driven like a stubborn nail into my mind. quite simply... wow."
Posted by Sketso on "Starlings" by johntaiyu
- "ahhh poignant and peaceful..pwoerfully piercing and resonantly, reverently shushing. missed your voice around these parts."
Posted by Unknown on "Joy Life Cadence" by johntaiyu
- "that ending still kicks my ass... and I still want to claim the whole thing as my theme. :) A 2nd (and more) kudos to you!"
Posted by Sketso on "Dry Drunk" by johntaiyu
- "...the changes in tone and rhythm from section to section embodied the mood of each seasonal excerpt... i am amazed at the three poems i've read so far and i am excited to read more. your writing has blown me away... i don't know what else to say except thank you for writing. respectfully, jonas"
Posted by Jonas on "My Perfect Wilderness" by johntaiyu
- "beautiful, obviously. what else is there to say? nothing that i know of, anyway.."
Posted by Mari on "Of You" by johntaiyu
- "so complete. a precisionary image. almost felt rather than merely read. +nessa"
Posted by Unknown on "Of You" by johntaiyu
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