Of You

Being with you
is like standing beneath
a waterfall
and being drenched
in the mist
of joy.

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Published on Thursday, September 11, 2008. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Of You"

On Tuesday, September 30, 2008, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106) wrote:

Whats great is when you truly can be with someone under the water falls. That is truly bliss......
On Tuesday, September 23, 2008, Mari (419) wrote:

beautiful, obviously. what else is there to say? nothing that i know of, anyway..
A former member wrote: so complete. a precisionary image. almost felt rather than merely read. +nessa
On Thursday, September 11, 2008, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Fucking genius :) This one of those pieces. Rare. Great. And on reading it, think, "Why didn't I write this?!!! I love it!" Heh, or something =) -Carl
On Thursday, September 11, 2008, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

*is
On Thursday, September 11, 2008, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

Damn you.