Comments by All Members
- ""Then my soul, it was muted,
And my tears could scream no more "
i love that line. its fucken awesome.
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Posted by Twilight on "a soft denial" by FallenSky
- "Oooo...this was a learning expreince. Kind of a "you can't go back because nothing is ever the same in reality or perception" kinda thing. I enjoyed this greatly:O)~DW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "a soft denial" by FallenSky
- "Oh wow... how steadily you kept the feeling. It only dawned on me what this was all about on the very three lines. Then I went over it again, and again...and was again...stunned. You are so creative. You make you points with natures small subtlys and they"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Mirror Blossoms" by FallenSky
- "hehehe....I had to get out my dictionary. I agree with manywalks... Awe inspiring. Soft, quiet, sorrowful and oh so mournful. Pure beauty to it's fullest.~DW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "Thus Am I Alone" by FallenSky
- "See what lovely things I miss when I scamper off to other worlds than DP. This was near intoxicating. ~ mw"
Posted by manywalks on "Love Scenario" by FallenSky
- "Just like it was said...AMAZING...AND..BEAUTIFULLY PUT..it's all this image you create that seems to be torn as you end it "I’m bleeding. . ."....another taste of true talent nicely displayed."
Posted by maddin foxxxy on "I'm bleeding" by FallenSky
- ""The myriad of pigments dance with my psyche," this is an incredible line, which seems to be the heart of an incredibly false poem, though false it is not; if written for me, i might have cried pearls, though they be but lies."
Posted by Unknown on "A False Poem" by FallenSky
- ""...glimpse
Of paradise?..." is how I feel, as I begin to read your poetry... beautiful words, and the rhytym flows w/ a classical style rhyme pattern which works wonderfully."
Posted by Unknown on "Song to a Virgin in a Garden" by FallenSky
- "I remember you from the old site...I was rottedtemptation. You*ve always had such a beautfil way of putting things into words, and you have yet to cease. Well done!"
Posted by Unknown on "A False Poem" by FallenSky
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