A Tale of Beauty and Decay
By FallenSky
Neath the darkness of a velvet sky
She sees with amber eyes of dawn,
Beyond a veil of nightshade lost,
She comes adorned of sorrow’s bane.
Her gown that flows with evening’s kiss,
Its tresses marked of Decay
Into the night to a lake of sorrow
I wander weary and alone;
Once I was told a tale of mourning,
Yet I slept before the Storyteller was through,
Now I search for words sung in the darkness
To wake me before my dreams are gone
Evensong sung amongst the shadows
Of a lunar promenade,
The winterfullmoon shines bleak in the forest,
Where the trees must bear an ancient name,
And from their branches,
Hang my gallows…
With blood on my lips
I kiss the sky,
While here on Earth’s candid breast
I lay,
As the subtle essence of death
Wracks my machine, yet again,
And again,
…And again
Deep in the forest of night
Is a lake of sorrow
Where the hue of earthly beauty fades away,
There I sang a song of mourning
When Beauty kissed Decay
“Silent, she weeps in the night
For her burden of paradise,
gazing, her amber eyes of dawn,
Mourning the absence of death,
Of an equilibrium lost,
In a balance of Beauty and Decay”
Comments on "A Tale of Beauty and Decay"
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A former member wrote:
ironic how we intertwine the two...beauty of imperfections...flaws that shout truth and glory. .. .there IS such beauty in a breaking; makes me think of sculptors and stonemasons....and the graceful fall of his is exquisite; your words continue to impress and emboss.....soft.subtle.splendourous.splendid..
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A former member wrote:
hmmm a spinnner of brightly colored fables you are my CrestFallenSky... I hope you are not fallen still; the ending songs within your songs are very distinguishing... very stylish
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
This is beautiful...I can feel the regret, but acceptance of fate. This is so beautiful! ~Mikey
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On Tuesday, May 20, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
You are such a wonderful writer. DP is all the better for you beautiful work...Always so vivid in details that flow as naturally as dust...wow...~DW~
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On Monday, May 5, 2003, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
Damn, this is good . i mean REAL GOOD . This particular style reminds me of one of the great poets from the most recent "DP". Asylem Princess i believe was the name ... at nay rate . im off to read more of these works.
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A former member wrote:
This is one of my favorites by far, the imagery is elegant and tragic. So capturing.
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On Thursday, May 1, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Mystical and stirring. This poem takes me places. Masterfully written. It seems to link extremely well to your profile picture... just a thought.
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A former member wrote:
this is one of the best works i've read so far on this site. the vividness and imagery is very well thought out. great job.
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A former member wrote:
Your imagination and talent...stem from a plain seldom touched in the realm of creativity...this is the last comment I'll bug you with tonight...but expect more!
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A former member wrote:
very nice CFS!
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On Monday, March 24, 2003, darkness_descends
(12) wrote:
I don't know what to say... I am in awe. Such flow and beauty. Just left me speechless ~Darkness~
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On Monday, March 24, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets
(55) wrote:
well written it flowed so well, great write
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On Monday, March 24, 2003, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
Mmmmm... beautiful... so tragic and lovely. Nice.