Song to a Virgin in a Garden

By FallenSky

There she fell, ah there she fell,
Down
Where scarlet moonbeams dwell,
I held her once,
Or was it twice?
I caught a glimpse
of paradise,
These burning eyes,
My lonely eyes,
They caught a glimpse
Of paradise,
But was it real, so real to me,
I know not now, my time forgotten.
Without the words
To laud her fall
Down
To the garden's heart
Where moonbeams dwell.
In a garden she fell?
Ah yes, she fell,
caught by radiant, scarlet shards,
And so, was it once,
Or merely twice,
That I caught a glimpse
Of paradise?

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© 2002 CrestFallenSky
Published on Wednesday, October 30, 2002.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • OLd SouL On Saturday, November 8, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    yes, that was absolutely lovely to read. it danced and floated gracefully through my mind. :::OLd

  • A former member wrote: This is sowonderful... I could almost hear the music through your words... *Lilith*

  • diavolessa On Sunday, May 18, 2003, diavolessa (207)By person wrote:

    simply beautiful.. The flow was very sad and settled.. ~liked it a lot!

  • A former member wrote: This is very pretty. Good work.. :)

  • A former member wrote: "...glimpse Of paradise?..." is how I feel, as I begin to read your poetry... beautiful words, and the rhytym flows w/ a classical style rhyme pattern which works wonderfully.

  • shadowsinthelight On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, shadowsinthelight (146)By person wrote:

    Well done, soft melodic flow. Keep writing,S.

  • cre On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, cre (410)By person wrote:

    Very nice ... has a lovely cadence.

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