In The Majesty of Silence, I Observe
By FallenSky
Forever behind me,
Hides a shadow,
Pale, yet ever luminescent,
Clinging to my every step,
As though I’m bound to fall
Blindly I run down these paths,
The quintessence tearing from my chest,
With every step,
In every breath,
My heart grows nearer
To this destiny waiting on the horizon
I am often drawn to wonder why
When every time I am bound to achieve
A sip from the elder’s ambrosial chalice,
My very doubts are firm as stone,
Forging yet another step
I am forced to overcome
Ahh…
I long to be as these stones,
At one with the earth,
Yet my shadow drives me onward
My soul embraced by the earth,
This darkling soil catalyzes my strength,
A clandestine heirloom,
Burning in the green flame of reason,
A part of me,
I cannot see
Formless dreams compel me to remember,
The truths I found with child’s eyes,
My visions often intertwine,
A clearer mind
I seek to find
Comments on "In The Majesty of Silence, I Observe"
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A former member wrote:
the quiet agony and slight linger of beauty along every yein is so effectual.... and i adore yoour profile pic; very bernini, michelangelo....reminds me of all the efort to uncover every ounce of epicness and beauty......should read more of your works.
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A former member wrote:
"Ahh…
I long to be as these stones,
At one with the earth,
Yet my shadow drives me onward "
I love this stanza...and this poem is really deep...keep writing. :)
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A former member wrote:
I'll have to read all of your poems... This is far beyond my words can comment... *Lilith*
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
This was humbling in some way I can't figure...but very dense and fresh. I felt every swerve and bump of this...you made the texture 3D in feeling and taste. I love this one...very awsome. ~JM~
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On Saturday, August 16, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Mmmmm, loved the feel and overall taste of this one. Pefectly done indeed. ~ mw
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On Saturday, June 14, 2003, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
Very nice, the two ending lines sliced through my skin like a bullet .. laying the final peace to a puzzle .. [perfectly done].[D&A]