Comments by All Members
- "I loved it, the rhyme was spot on, as was the meter, I liked the wording you used in the second stanza, it was also short and to the point, write the fuck on!"
Posted by HeadpatSlut on "Riddance" by Beluriel
- "I agree with both comments, And your third comment will say: This is a very good piece of work :] Good job."
Posted by D3ADT0WN on "Escape" by Beluriel
- "The girl in the last stanza was chosen to be the vessel of the Child of Dark. She will give birth to him."
Posted by Beluriel on "The Ones" by Beluriel
- "I'm a little lost with the last stanza. Is the Dark One male or female? None the less a riveting piece, truly something after my own heart. Bravo."
Posted by MESUN on "The Ones" by Beluriel
- "i must say you are an amazing poet...personally...i dont believe in such a thing, but fthat doesnt stop the brilliance of this piece of work, fantastic write, nice flow...~*dani*~"
Posted by GraveFlower on "Resurgence of Darkness" by Beluriel
- "ooooh..the imagery in this is beautiful, and the rhyme scheme...wow! The way the words tumbled and flowed through my mind gave this a haunting quality. Excellent piece. ~*Beth*~"
Posted by Unknown on "My Cathedral" by Beluriel
- "i could feel my self in this church, this dream, growing up around me like giant redwoods... what we hold inside can be truly amazing... good write"
Posted by jack paper on "My Cathedral" by Beluriel
- "My intention for writing it was to educate a friend of mine about the Irish legend. It just so happens that I was feeling quite inspired at the moment, so I wrote it out in a rougher version and refined it to what it is now at a later date."
Posted by Beluriel on "The Banshee's Cry" by Beluriel
- "That's because I haven't reconciled them seamlessly. They used to be two separate poems. Thanks for the comment."
Posted by Beluriel on "The Ones" by Beluriel
- "I liked this but the change in the rhyming scheme threw me off after the second stanza... good write nontheless though."
Posted by Crimson Shade on "The Ones" by Beluriel
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