Killing Rain

By Beluriel

I think of faces wrought with pain,
Shining softly in the rain,
I see above a dark grey sky,
And in the distance ravens cry.

Before the slaughter comes the storm,
Blood is spilled, flesh is torn,
And those who think that all is well,
Are welcome to my private hell.

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© 2005 Beluriel
Published on Tuesday, November 15, 2005.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very dark, and very deep. one of my favorites so far.....

  • Bluegirl On Wednesday, September 12, 2007, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    ooph! Surprise ending. I like this one, short, but sweet.

  • A former member wrote: very depressing but quite beautiful... i love it!

  • A former member wrote: beautiful and dark. I like it. **smiles** ~A~

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