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Riddance
By Beluriel
Sing, all you spirits wild,
Sing the song and save the child,
Who can save us all, he'll save the Earth,
If we can spare him the tragedy of his birth.
He'll punish with fire, and rule with rain,
His only desires are torment and pain,
If he lives, we'll never know light nor mirth!
We must deny him the right of his birth!
So sing, all you spirits grand,
Sing the song and save the land,
Deny the child the gift of life,
So Earth can be free of darkness and strife.
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© 2005 Beluriel
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On Thursday, April 22, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259)
wrote:
I loved it, the rhyme was spot on, as was the meter, I liked the wording you used in the second stanza, it was also short and to the point, write the fuck on!
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On Monday, November 14, 2005, Philla
(95) wrote:
Very good flow and wording. Love the message and how you put the old languange back into modern poetry. Beautiful. -*Philla*-
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On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, Beluriel
(5) wrote:
Thank you! Very nice of you to say!
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