Comments by All Members
- ""Sunlight through her dress tracing the outline of a memory.."
Dear goodness that wanting to remember sounds like torture. "
Posted by Unknown on "Almost Mercy" by Stranger
- "I typed three comments before this, they weren't good enough for this. God, I hope you've given in, though."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Almost Mercy" by Stranger
- "My mind is spinning like a top with the few, juicy possibilities here Stranger. Tell Carmina Gitana that she's missed, if you ever hear from her. A tantalizing image conjured for pain or pleasure with the telling admission that "I cannot help the willing" - Oh ye of weak flesh, Cheers! - Dan"
Posted by dwells on "Almost Mercy" by Stranger
- "Ah, the classic missionary position as told through the mouth of what appears to be a missionary. This is so erotic, and so well wrought, and I love it! Reb:)."
Posted by Unknown on "Missionary Position" by Stranger
- "YEEEHAWW, you still write. And you're still stupendous at it. Every time I do my semi-annual login to DP, I hope and hope to see something from you and it's amazing when I do :)
This is so beautiful. Your language has become even more stripped-down and evocative than before, I think. The repetitiveness of the last stanza feels like a heartbeat. I've just re-read it like 5 times and I have no plans to stop anytime soon. "
Posted by Carmina Gitana on "You are Still Here" by Stranger
- "Haunting indeed. There's a deep and singular sadness in these words. Lovely writing though, I liked it very much."
Posted by Unknown on "You are Still Here" by Stranger
- "I have been waiting a whole year ! It is exciting to see new words from you. Always unusual. Always original. Always a pleasure. Don't stay away so long next time sir."
Posted by Cantara on "You are Still Here" by Stranger
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