Comments by All Members

"Excellent piece! I love the swirling, confused, disturbing imagery that nonetheless ends with the lines "my lips still whisper my love for you." Nice! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "Love.lies" by Lady Grinning Soul

"The only word I can think of to describe this is intense. Great write!"
Posted by Kristoff on "Love.lies" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Nice imagery really captured the emotion very good write."
Posted by TheDeadOne on "Bone Fragments and Broken Glass" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Very nice read, it has great flow"
Posted by matteus on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul

"This reminds me of the song Release Me by Pearl jam. The words are running fast, turning and burning. I like!"
Posted by Unknown on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I enjoyed this. Your words are very beautiful"
Posted by Unknown on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Awesomeness. The musical references are used well and just makes everything flow."
Posted by devilspoet on "Bone Fragments and Broken Glass" by Lady Grinning Soul

"great visual wording, beautiful content. took me to a place i didn't want to come back from....fantasy-astic!!"
Posted by natalie on "I Lose Myself Between Satin Sheets" by Lady Grinning Soul

"beautifully descriptive. thanks for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

"flowed perfectly from start to finish...drawing the readers to feel, want, hate, feel some more. well done."
Posted by natalie on "Bone Fragments and Broken Glass" by Lady Grinning Soul

"i like this one because it just seems like feelings stapled together by words. and the answer to #8 is you shouldn't"
Posted by Unknown on "Bone Fragments and Broken Glass" by Lady Grinning Soul

"i love the imagery in this piece-the blood splattered mirror, the raindrops trickling down :) very visually & aesthetically pleasing to me. i felt it in my toes, all the way up to my noggin. keep up the good work, space monkey! "
Posted by technicolour-girl on "Bone Fragments and Broken Glass" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Beautiful. Lots of powerful imagery is invoked by this. Can't wait to read more by you. "
Posted by BrokenButterflyWings on "Bone Fragments and Broken Glass" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Right on the money. Very sexy. It's gotta be a fav of mine"
Posted by Unknown on "I Lose Myself Between Satin Sheets" by Lady Grinning Soul

"this is incredibly vivid...dreams like this seem to play out in slow motion and last long after we are awake.wonderful magic you've spun here, darlin'."
Posted by Unknown on "I Lose Myself Between Satin Sheets" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I really like this one. "
Posted by Huey Lewis on "Infected" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Oh so lovely and melancholy. I really like, "And I tell myself that I was meant to be {wandering round inside someone’s dream}""
Posted by The Lipstick Factor on "I Lose Myself Between Satin Sheets" by Lady Grinning Soul

"absolutely exquisite, each and every bit... more!.. ;p"
Posted by Riven Waker on "I Lose Myself Between Satin Sheets" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I have to show this to my friend who just loves anything having to do with the wind beneath her wings... that is something to do with the sister she lost. It is a beautiful read, the perfect length also."
Posted by lovechild on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Really enjoyed this,... such a mosaic of cracks and colors,... blending and bending to the soothes of soft and course,... to relate to what is instinctively thought of as 'beautiful' with the referencing of satins and vanillas and starlit kisses,.. only to murder up the page with more aggressive word choices worked an absolute treat for me,.... one descpriptive is only ever truly appreciated when it has an opposite to guage against,.... excellent write."
Posted by Unknown on "I Lose Myself Between Satin Sheets" by Lady Grinning Soul

"I loved this, the rain is so evil!"
Posted by Spiral Downward on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Yes the rain, oh the rain...I am not a fan of the rain...this reminds me of my day today, as I am looking out the window at rain. I am just hearing it tap my window almost laughing at me as I can't step outside. This is stunning. Thank you."
Posted by Mylissa on "It's Raining" by Lady Grinning Soul

"you clever cookie...I don't know how I missed this one, but I'm glad I found it."
Posted by Unknown on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

"Rock on Gold Dust Woman...."
Posted by Huey Lewis on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

"a feminine storm cloud... made me glad i built a house."
Posted by Jonas on "Wind Currents" by Lady Grinning Soul

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