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Hypnotize
By Rhys Ki
Your sly lies
Slither out of your mouth
With a fork-tongued rhyme
And a fork-tongued sound.
Your eyes chime,
Emitting devils’ spray,
Numbing my mind
And breaking my willful ways.
Your cries hypnotize
And draw me near,
Quieting my surprise
And telling me what I want to hear.
Why do you lie
When I am around,
Instead of sharing the prize
Of the love that we’ve found?
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© 2007 Rhys Ki
Published on Tuesday, May 29, 2007.
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, nur hidayah
(114)
wrote:
It started out very promising. I love the first stanza. Wish you expanded more on this though.
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
I'm not fond of rhyme, but this carried the black charm we are so fond of here. Welcome to DP. ~b
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On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, veingo
(526) wrote:
This makes me think of one of my own. A poem, and a lover. Welcome to DP. ^V^
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A former member wrote:
This is nice,
keep writing!!
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On Tuesday, May 29, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
Thanks, razorqueen. Love.
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