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Astral Fall
By Recycled
I was safe in the arms of an angel
Until she let go
And I fell so far
That I lost sight of where I was going
Up turned to down
Stars burned into streaks
Time fell out of sequence
I fell until the black turned to gray
I fell through a black hole
Where not even feelings could escape
Further from safe and security
Faster than thought
I found myself approaching a new dawn
Drawn toward someone I should have fled from
For she brought salvation too close to reality
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© 2007 Recycled
Published on Sunday, May 20, 2007.
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A former member wrote:
This is mysterious, and the message slowly comes over me. If you place all your faith in only one thing, and that thing fails, you succumb to defeat. Bravo
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On Monday, April 26, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(259)
wrote:
I like it, nice flow.
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On Monday, June 18, 2007, missanthropic
(26) wrote:
spectacular write...as per usual.
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On Monday, June 11, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Ending kicks butt. Good write all in all. Heartfelt and honest. A dreamlike state
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On Monday, June 11, 2007, dark_mistress
(19) wrote:
That is so well written....wow
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On Sunday, May 20, 2007, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
hmmm.. Its been a while, i think too long maybe. Everyone seems to come and go now, more than the constent posting it once was. sad really.
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On Sunday, May 20, 2007, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
But as always, your work fills me with a kind of completeness? i rather sinking feeling only to be brought up at the end, even if your held up by the devil. Interesting to say the least, and oh so poeticly beautiful. ~gothic~
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