Astral Fall

By Recycled

I was safe in the arms of an angel
Until she let go
And I fell so far
That I lost sight of where I was going

Up turned to down
Stars burned into streaks
Time fell out of sequence
I fell until the black turned to gray

I fell through a black hole
Where not even feelings could escape
Further from safe and security
Faster than thought

I found myself approaching a new dawn
Drawn toward someone I should have fled from
For she brought salvation too close to reality

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Published on Sunday, May 20, 2007. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Astral Fall"

A former member wrote: This is mysterious, and the message slowly comes over me. If you place all your faith in only one thing, and that thing fails, you succumb to defeat. Bravo
On Monday, April 26, 2010, HeadpatSlut (257) wrote:

I like it, nice flow.
On Monday, June 18, 2007, missanthropic (26) wrote:

spectacular write...as per usual.
On Monday, June 11, 2007, Dancing_Monkey (1228) wrote:

Ending kicks butt. Good write all in all. Heartfelt and honest. A dreamlike state
On Monday, June 11, 2007, dark_mistress (19) wrote:

That is so well written....wow
On Sunday, May 20, 2007, GothicBlack (186) wrote:

hmmm.. Its been a while, i think too long maybe. Everyone seems to come and go now, more than the constent posting it once was. sad really.
On Sunday, May 20, 2007, GothicBlack (186) wrote:

But as always, your work fills me with a kind of completeness? i rather sinking feeling only to be brought up at the end, even if your held up by the devil. Interesting to say the least, and oh so poeticly beautiful. ~gothic~