Seedling Sour

By Equinox Asylum

Moments pass as flesh to spirit
with the grace of flickering memory
and I am humbled.

I die in the past and fold resurrection
in the palm of an aging hand.

No more mourning.
No more dreaming.
No more standing in rising wishes.

I am lonely yet not alone.
I have grown.


Troy Allen Bull 3.07



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© 2007 Troy Allen Bull
Published on Saturday, March 31, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "I am lonely yet not alone" Provocative and deeply passionate, in an essence. You have such poetic flair and give such understanding. You shed light on shadows. This was achingly beautiful. I know these words. Welcome home.

  • Mistress Shadow On Monday, May 14, 2007, Mistress Shadow (249)By person wrote:

    This is precise right to the point and the conclusion is fuming throughout the lines. Nice to see you momentarily came back as well. ~T

  • A former member wrote: IT IS ABOUT TIME YOU POST AGAIN.

  • A former member wrote: no joke, i actually was skimming the fresh reads list, bitching to my roomate about how none of the people i like post anymore, and then BAM. one of my favoritest returns! and you never disappoint.

  • A former member wrote: this is bethany, by the way. formerly sunflower girl. just in case you were wondering who this crackhead is. lol. *hugs* glad your back.

  • A former member wrote: hehe yes she was

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, April 3, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This was extroadinary in how you conveyed so much in such a short space and with such succinct simplicity. Bloomin' great!

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Sunday, April 1, 2007, Lady Grinning Soul (143)By person wrote:

    its been a while since you posted.... and this one is still as good as they were when you last posted.....

  • DarkDruidess On Saturday, March 31, 2007, DarkDruidess (313)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful in the impact it leaves in my mind...Your words dig deep. Peace, Dru

  • Guillotine On Saturday, March 31, 2007, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    Been too long, Baron, since I've caught up with your works, this reminds me how amazing you are and what I've been missing out on.

  • blue On Saturday, March 31, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I too concur, all great poetry leaves me smiling. I am smiling. Yup. ~b

  • Mylissa On Saturday, March 31, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I like your smiles.

  • blue On Saturday, March 31, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    =) take that home with you

  • Mylissa On Saturday, March 31, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I agree this was was devastating, outragous.

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