~Ode To Men~

By Mistress Shadow

Blessed are the men you can touch,
but cannot call your own;
they are the ones whom will paint a smile on your face
but will never be close enough to hurt you.

Blessed are the ones who can stick fingers to their lips to create absurd catcalls;
they are the ones who reassure every woman
that her effort for beauty has not been in vain.

Blessed are those who chase women with words unconditionally,
despite rejection;
they are the ones who gain nothing, give what seems like nothing,
but truly rebuild self-esteems.

Blessed are pretty boys at odd corner
for they are the ones who allow women to dream and to hope.

Blessed are the ones who grow from failed attempts;
they are the few who do not end up alone.

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Copyright 2004 mistress_shadow
Published on Wednesday, July 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: haha, nice little insight into actions versus perceptions - thank you for the read :)

  • A former member wrote: Your depth is compelling, thank you. (said the donkey to the carrot)

  • A former member wrote: Thought provoking piece with a touch of humor. I like it.

  • A former member wrote: Great! At least MOST men can have a positive function. Besides sex, that is.

  • A former member wrote: blessed be those who can find something valuable, even optimistic, in the seemingly base or somewhat commonplace, and can convey such sentiments with class and grace... thanks!

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, April 25, 2007, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    here here!

  • Cattarax On Wednesday, May 31, 2006, Cattarax (210)By person wrote:

    Cant live with them .. cnat shoot them .. lol .. what would life be with out men

  • Equinox Asylum On Wednesday, April 19, 2006, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    Stunning. This is a fav. The insight in this is genius. ;}

  • The Crimson Queen On Friday, November 4, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    *claps* I really love this, its so true!

  • peril_notion On Saturday, June 11, 2005, peril_notion (87)By person wrote:

    I love it... truth at it's rawest sincerity. ~Heather

  • A former member wrote: Wow, very original. I'm speechless. Well done. =-MO-=

  • manywalks On Tuesday, August 10, 2004, manywalks (747)By person wrote:

    I'll give that an 'amen'. ~ wen

  • A former member wrote: i feel like on of those men? in a odd way...

  • Lord Kalgalath On Wednesday, July 14, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    Excellent write... well thought and written

  • Mademoiselle_Minx On Wednesday, July 14, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (108)By person wrote:

    woah...that was brillient.A different slant on many types of men, in a positive light.I likey very much :)

  • A former member wrote: aww lovely...very nice

  • A former member wrote: a thought provoking peice here mistress shadow, welld one.

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