caught raw
By zanewill
I never liked sex tripping
It’s too raw like stripping
Or watching a real murder
Conjuring electrified anger & horror
Spit on my face
Leaves not a trace
Of saliva lingering
Only faint dried trails of colors fingering
& caressing that space
Tales of the strange
No longer appear de-
Ranged shallow facades & fakeness
of people appear
Too real yet somehow not real
At all awful
too intense to bear
Maybe it is the fear
Hovering along the borders of madness
Maybe my dear
You fancy yourself a seer
Caught in some travesty
Too much knowledge can be fatal
Dis-
Ease of thought charades
In majestic guises
Strange aliveness
Splits off once again
Comments on "caught raw"
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, HattoriHanzo
(21) wrote:
glad u left a comment for my journal piece, cuz i like u'r work alot. cool rhyme scheme and relatable content. i'll hav 2 read more of your stuff.
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On Thursday, February 8, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
Yes, welcome, this is a good write and the first read of you yet, so off to read more ^_^ -Heather-
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A former member wrote:
Interesting write. Welcome to DP. -Marlena
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, zanewill
(82) wrote:
thanx marlena!!