Jonathan's Haiku
By Armand
these are from a collection of Haikus written by my 11 yr old son.
a toad lies in the road
still as a dead man
with tiremarks on his head.
guinea pigs
chirping noisily for food
content with their owners.
remicade
having an IV in the back of your hand
for three hours.
not a car horn
but geese honking in the sky
in V-shaped patterns.
looking up at heaven
waiting for my time
to spread my wings and fly.
as i sit at home
i listen to the loudest music of all
silence.
walking across the beach
i turn my head and realize that
God's grief created a miracle.
as i look around at my family
i see my wallet is empty
but i am the richest man in the world.
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Copyright 2003 Armand
Published on Monday, April 14, 2003.
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
*smiles* amazing talenting! -kitty
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A former member wrote:
*is
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A former member wrote:
I still cant write a decent haiku.. he amazing. Lost
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On Monday, September 13, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
number six is particularly great. :) His talent is extremely impressive; your genes dance here!
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i love the second to last one,he should become a member!
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, FallenSky
(42) wrote:
these are very good, you must be very pleased to have such a poetic son ~CFS
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A former member wrote:
Your son is a good writer... does he have his own DarkPoetry account? I'd want to see it.
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On Friday, April 25, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
like father like son...:) hell, I'M almost proud. enough said.
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On Tuesday, April 15, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Very good! I always sucked at haikus. I wish I could write them like you. I really like the second to last one. It's very true. Silence is quite loud. Very good haikus, Jonathan. I hope that you post more of your work on here! :-)
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A former member wrote:
hey
awesome job..
youre a great poet jonathan
it takes a lot of talent to write haiku
-that actually sounds good
and you seem to possess all that (talent..keep writing..i look foward to reading more of your poetry and haiku!
--melorra
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On Friday, May 16, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
wow... i like these a lot please keep writing