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Without ever loving you
By Mistress Shadow
Soft and gliding, the pure experience of sensation
without the evoking stimulus.
How I long to feel you
and drift above and around you.
I will glide past every blade of hair on your arm
as I touch you,
without ever touching you.
The image of our fleshed lips being locked
in a single heart-filled embrace,
as I kiss you, with my lips dangling softly
centimeters from yours.
The warmth of my breath provoking the sensitivity of contact
when there is none.
I passionately kiss you,
without
ever
kissing you.
The delicacy of the flesh is only skin deep
And below the nerves lies so much more.
I love you
without
ever loving you.
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© 2006 Mistress Shadow
Published on Wednesday, December 13, 2006.
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A former member wrote:
Wow! So touching, so sad and emotional... I simply love it!
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A former member wrote:
That was so beautiful, it really touched my heart
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A former member wrote:
I am very impressed, I wish I found this site earlier. Your words communicate in a way thats almost hypnotic and I am literally having a flashback. hmmm, perhaps a scene from long ago. Awsome piece!!
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On Thursday, July 23, 2009, Scarrzz
(238)
wrote:
Freaking AmaZING. How could I have missed this one? * * * That took me in, and I replayed a scene from my own life, as if you wrote it while watching what was going on inside me. The pain is so familiar, and so . . . accurate, even down to the last stanza. Instant Fav.
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On Saturday, May 12, 2007, jack paper
(126) wrote:
sensational!
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A former member wrote:
WOW
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On Thursday, December 14, 2006, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
"I love you without ever loving you." Awww so beautifully written...full of emotion.
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On Thursday, December 14, 2006, Solace
(1069) wrote:
fantastically evoked, eloquent and daringly gorgeous - imaginatively wonderful piece
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A former member wrote:
ah... you've expressed the intagible with eloquence and precision... the medium for touching need not be through tactile sense... that which is truly touched by any phisical embrace is not the physical surface, nor even just below... feeling is much more
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A former member wrote:
*intangible*
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A former member wrote:
fleeting, as your words so vibrantly convey... with efficiency and edge, yet with tenderness unadorned pointing at that which must remain untouched, unpossessed, free and everso binding... gorgeous!! *bows*
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On Tuesday, August 14, 2012, The Dybbuk
(929) wrote:
what this guy said... I hope you are well, ms T. your words are missed... your presence in these dimly lit halls....all the best to you, always.
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On Wednesday, December 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
Words of what this made me feel ~Mirrored
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On Wednesday, December 13, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was beautiful*bows* I take my hat down to you, your a magnificent writer and this write just showed how much.. Stunning and magical. Without ever doing so you do.. Images scrape across my lids I wish I could express but I'm beyond
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