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By the dried flower

i hurt you
and i'm sorry
i wish there was some way for me to make it up to you
but i know there isn't
i'm lonely
and i still need your love
i know you still love me
please take me back
i feel so pathetic that i'm begging
but i just cant handle being with out you
and i will do anything to have you back
because with out you there really is no me
i'm not whole
you still hold part of me

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© 2006 the dried flower
Published on Saturday, November 4, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Fantecstasy On Tuesday, December 4, 2007, Fantecstasy (120)By person wrote:

    an emotional tribute to mistakes that can be made... I wish my ex felt like this sometimes... oh well... (/depress) it was pretty good, I enjoyed reading it.

  • Mylissa On Friday, March 2, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    I agree title this because it is a good write. It if pure emotion....and we have all felt that.

  • sIo On Saturday, November 4, 2006, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    you can call this "without" or "hole of you" or something.....

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