its stupid but it sounded good at the time...

By so_skeevy

A Smile to cover pan,
A laugh to hide the Shame.
Pretend like nothing’s wrong,
You’ll never be the same.

You hide behind a friendly face,
You fear to wield a frown
The pain you alone embrace,
You lead your heart to drown.

Depression rains upon you,
you’ve caused your own despair.
Your life has turned to sadness,
Your heart beyond repair.

Nowhere for your soul to run,
You’re trapped in misery.
There is no outlet for your pain,
You’re left in agony.

Now your heart is bleeding,
Your secret still inside.
Your life has lost all meaning,
There’s nowhere left to hide.

Out comes the secret,
A relief upon your lips.
The pains once within your heart,
Have lost their iron-clad grips.

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Copyright 2004 so_skeevy
Published on Saturday, April 24, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • the dried flower On Saturday, August 5, 2006, the dried flower (67)By person wrote:

    wow. i really like this poem. i rated it 10 because when i read it i felt every thing you said. i have a question, i am putting poetry on my myspace because thats my theme, would it be all right if i put some of your work on my page, i need to know your n

  • A former member wrote: wow you must be a really talented writer. that was really good

  • A former member wrote: possibly the best thing I've read by you yet....I like how you projected your emotions on the the reader....when people write poems in first person it often just comes off as flowery complaining

  • A former member wrote: I will be anoth person to agree with Spikes and Daegonna. Powerful and awsome piece.

  • Spikes_of_Blue On Thursday, July 8, 2004, Spikes_of_Blue (42)By person wrote:

    wow...powerful as daegonna said...it may have sounded good at the time and it still sounds good now...

  • Daegonna On Saturday, April 24, 2004, Daegonna (27)By person wrote:

    Wow... Nice Write... Very Powerful... Keep It Up... ~Daegonna~

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