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Insomnia
By Bluegirl
M_s_in_ Pie_e_
monday
saturday
shall we take a ride on the trolley?
thursday
tuesday
I'm lost in the kingdom of
make believe
january
august
it's a quarter past a blur
?
Leaf bear is here
1:00pm
2:00PM
3:00AM
8:00PM
9:00AM
It's a cruel joke
With a never ending
alarm clock
SLAM!
Tell me I'm dreaming.
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© 2006 Bluegirl
Published on Friday, September 22, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Insomnia"
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On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Sin
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wrote:
this reminded me vaguely of Mr Rogers lol...unique to say the least ~kristy
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On Monday, September 25, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
I've struggled with insomnia most of my life, and have begrudgingly embraced it. So I know this feeling all too well. Great piece. Julia~
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On Saturday, September 23, 2006, thefairytaleheart
(13) wrote:
very lovely. i feel that way most times. yay prozak.
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A former member wrote:
"M_s_in_ Pie_e_" - fabulously creative! :?)
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On Friday, September 22, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
-sigh- no shit my friend. the abstrct thoughts that you cant describe and youre left watching that damn clock
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A former member wrote:
"It's a cruel joke/With a never ending/alarm clock" Yes, that it is. Insomnia...never a fun thing to be awake when the rest of the world dreams peacefully. Nice write. I can relate. ~*Beth*~
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