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By Bluegirl
I still think
you'll come home
any second now
capture me with
your candy kisses
whisper words
I've taken for granted
tell me that you
meant it
when you said
"Love always"
But I know how
I've hurt you
and I know
you're gone
so I'll keep
clutching this
picture and remind
myself
you left
because
of me
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A former member wrote:
A nightmare reborn as I read this. Beautiful!
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A former member wrote:
Exactly how I feel at moment my fiance left me 5 days ago and where there once was light, hope and love all I feel is myslf slowly slipping deeper into the darkness that now slowly engulfs my life
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A former member wrote:
Haunting. It hits a very deep spot in my heart. I love this.
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On Thursday, March 25, 2010, Miztaken4beauty
(176)
wrote:
Terrible sad. but pretty.
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A former member wrote:
"whisper words/I've taken for granted" You've a beautiful voice, m'dear; I know these words so well. Jules is right, it's not your fault. And the person this is for should know so. ~*Beth*~
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
awww hun this brought me to tears. If he doesn't come back, it's not your fault, for at least he knows the truth, you admitted it above. Wonderful job! *hugs* Julia~
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On Sunday, September 17, 2006, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
ah, thank you. Your words do mean a lot to me. Alas, if only it were a "he."
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