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Mistake
By l mo
As I lay here by my lonesome
I ask myself why I was so dumb
I must be blind to not have seen it
So what I deserve is what I'll get
An eternity of heartbreak
An eternity of pain
An eternity of loneliness
Which will sure drive me insane
He never should have got to me
I never should have cared
All the lies he spoke to me
All the weaknesses he bared
I was supposed to go away
But my heart told me otherwise
So I hesitated for just a moment
And I met my demise
For eternity I'll suffer
For the mistakes that I have made
Just because I fell in love
Doesn't mean I should have stayed.
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© 2006 german kitten
Published on Tuesday, August 22, 2006.
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On Thursday, November 23, 2006, edenscancer
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wrote:
another phenominal piece.
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On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Beautifully heartwrenching. Great job! Julia~
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On Tuesday, August 22, 2006, K_Love
(525) wrote:
I know this feeling all too well, stingingly beautiful write. I felt this one as it hit home.
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A former member wrote:
This is a very good poem. Hopefully you'll someone who cares about you and loves you. You are also a very good writer.
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