Hover

By Equinox Asylum

Butterflying blindly to reach heaven fast,
I swim past a silver lining.

My blue sky will not rain emotion,
So I wait in vain for anyone
to throw me a halo ocean.

Until that day,
I hover,
Endlessly, I hover...

(repost for Bethany)

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Published on Tuesday, April 25, 2006. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Hover"

A former member wrote: i did like it the the 2nd paragraph is gr8
On Saturday, April 7, 2007, carlosjackal (2786) wrote:

"halo ocean"....:} Wish I'd thought of that image first. An altogether great emotive write -Carl
A former member wrote: beautiul. i love your symbolism. blue skies, silver linings, oceans; great. ....-samone
On Sunday, November 19, 2006, mozarts cat (183) wrote:

one of my favourites of yours .. when are you coming back Troy?!?!
On Thursday, November 23, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (1495) wrote:

*weeps*...damn right
On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580) wrote:

I enjoyed this piece very much - glad you reposted it. Love the visuals. Ciao, T/S
A former member wrote: i will never, ever get tired of this poem. i actually wrote it down in my journal when you reposted it, and since i take my journal with me pretty much everywhere, this is always with me. endlessly, i will love this...
On Friday, July 13, 2007, Equinox Asylum (140) wrote:

Sorry it took a year to thank you for loving this write, but I have been gone a long time. Thanx Beth.
On Monday, May 1, 2006, mywristshurt (405) wrote:

i wish Bethany would have written more... i also wish she would put a little more rhyme to it.. otherwise, its just okay for me
A former member wrote: what the hell?
A former member wrote: seriously....what the hell????? ~Tamara
On Monday, May 1, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560) wrote:

This was just incredible~!
A former member wrote: thank you. :D
A former member wrote: i can hear this as a song. i love how you write. beautifully wistful.-silver