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Hover
By Equinox Asylum
Butterflying blindly to reach heaven fast,
I swim past a silver lining.
My blue sky will not rain emotion,
So I wait in vain for anyone
to throw me a halo ocean.
Until that day,
I hover,
Endlessly, I hover...
(repost for Bethany)
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© 2006 Troy Allen Bull
Published on Tuesday, April 25, 2006.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Hover"
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A former member wrote:
i did like it the the 2nd paragraph is gr8
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On Saturday, April 7, 2007, carlosjackal
(3018)
wrote:
"halo ocean"....:} Wish I'd thought of that image first. An altogether great emotive write -Carl
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A former member wrote:
beautiul. i love your symbolism. blue skies, silver linings, oceans; great. ....-samone
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On Sunday, November 19, 2006, mozarts cat
(184) wrote:
one of my favourites of yours .. when are you coming back Troy?!?!
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On Thursday, November 23, 2006, The Zebra Warrior
(1521) wrote:
*weeps*...damn right
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On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
I enjoyed this piece very much - glad you reposted it. Love the visuals. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
i will never, ever get tired of this poem. i actually wrote it down in my journal when you reposted it, and since i take my journal with me pretty much everywhere, this is always with me. endlessly, i will love this...
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On Friday, July 13, 2007, Equinox Asylum
(140) wrote:
Sorry it took a year to thank you for loving this write, but I have been gone a long time. Thanx Beth.
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On Monday, May 1, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
i wish Bethany would have written more... i also wish she would put a little more rhyme to it.. otherwise, its just okay for me
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A former member wrote:
what the hell?
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A former member wrote:
seriously....what the hell????? ~Tamara
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On Monday, May 1, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(564) wrote:
This was just incredible~!
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A former member wrote:
thank you. :D
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A former member wrote:
i can hear this as a song. i love how you write. beautifully wistful.-silver
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