Hover

By Equinox Asylum

Butterflying blindly to reach heaven fast,
I swim past a silver lining.

My blue sky will not rain emotion,
So I wait in vain for anyone
to throw me a halo ocean.

Until that day,
I hover,
Endlessly, I hover...



(repost for Bethany)

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© 2006 Troy Allen Bull
Published on Tuesday, April 25, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: i did like it the the 2nd paragraph is gr8

  • carlosjackal On Saturday, April 7, 2007, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    "halo ocean"....:} Wish I'd thought of that image first. An altogether great emotive write -Carl

  • A former member wrote: beautiul. i love your symbolism. blue skies, silver linings, oceans; great. ....-samone

  • mozarts cat On Sunday, November 19, 2006, mozarts cat (183)By person wrote:

    one of my favourites of yours .. when are you coming back Troy?!?!

  • The Zebra Warrior On Thursday, November 23, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (1495)By person wrote:

    *weeps*...damn right

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, July 3, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    I enjoyed this piece very much - glad you reposted it. Love the visuals. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: i will never, ever get tired of this poem. i actually wrote it down in my journal when you reposted it, and since i take my journal with me pretty much everywhere, this is always with me. endlessly, i will love this... Scholar

  • Equinox Asylum On Friday, July 13, 2007, Equinox Asylum (140)By person wrote:

    Sorry it took a year to thank you for loving this write, but I have been gone a long time. Thanx Beth.

  • mywristshurt On Monday, May 1, 2006, mywristshurt (405)By person wrote:

    i wish Bethany would have written more... i also wish she would put a little more rhyme to it.. otherwise, its just okay for me

  • A former member wrote: what the hell?

  • A former member wrote: seriously....what the hell????? ~Tamara

  • Dissolving Poet On Monday, May 1, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    This was just incredible~!

  • A former member wrote: thank you. :D

  • A former member wrote: i can hear this as a song. i love how you write. beautifully wistful.-silver

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